Thursday, December 6, 2012

Reflection for "Kidnapping Is Sometimes Easier on the Other Side"


Lakendra Richey
Professor Tetterton
ENGL 1100-110
Final Project
 06 December 2012

Reflection for “Kidnapping Is Sometimes Easier on the Other Side”
            When I first wrote this paper, I was extremely nervous about turning it in because I didn’t exactly know how the “college grading system” went.  I spent a great deal of time trying to consider what I should write about and how I should write it.  I allowed some of my peers to proofread it and give me their feedback which was sometimes good and other times not so much my style.  Fortunately on the night before the final paper was due, I ran into this guy from New York who was working on his Master’s in business and he said “You look extremely stressed out. Is there anything I can do to get you smiling?” and I response told him “Yeah, just proofread my paper because I don’t know what the heck I am doing!” So he proofread it and to my surprise when he gave it back, it was full of markings, yellow tabs, highlighter marks, and many different circles and lines pointing in opposite directions.  I immediately teared up because I thought that that meant my paper had to suck pretty badly, but before I could let a tear fall he said “It’s not that bad, you just need to use stronger vocabulary and develop your sentences a little more. I’ll help you, if you have time to spare.” So we moved to one of the little tables in the Joyner circulation area and worked on my paper while sipping caramel macchiatos until closing. 
            The next day when I handed my paper in I felt so relieved because when I handed it in I knew that it was going to do me justice because I had really put ALOT of work and time into it.  I was extremely anxious to know what my grade was over the few weeks that we had to get it back and once I actually saw my grade I believed that the wait was well worth it.  Due to the amount of work and time I put into this paper, I decided to create a revision on it for my final project.  I changed a lot of things in response to your comments such as changing my title from “A Parallel Universe between Two Countries” to “Kidnapping is Sometimes Easier on the Other Side”, listing my main points, and reevaluating my citations.  I also went in and changed the introduction back to how I had originally had it before I had turned it in and I condensed and changed a few paragraphs around.   
            Being apart of your English 1100-Section 110 class has been a great pleasure because I have learned many exercises and tricks to making myself become a better writer.  You have also taught me how to find my voice by making Project Two a blog orientated paper, which I absolutely loved.  I really hope that I can somehow get you as a professor next semester because your class has taught me a great deal in the essence of writing and I have absolutely enjoyed every last moment of it.

Kidnapping Is Easier on the Other Side


Lakendra Richey
Professor Tetterton
ENGL 1100-110
Final Project
 06 December 2012

Kidnapping is Sometimes Easier on the Other Side
            In the United States of America, a nation that holds a population of approximately three hundred million, a child is kidnapped every forty seconds (U.S. & World Population Clocks).  Even though this number adds up to a large sum of 765,000 a year (U.S. & World), ironically, there is always some type of rescue squad or Amber alert in motion to help find these missing children.  Moreover, if these missing children are fortunate enough to be broadcasted on the news, due to their family contacting the media, many companies and people offer large sums of money to anyone who has useful information in hopes of each child’s safe return home.  However, in the country of Uganda, technology is not as advanced so therefore the numbers are not as precise.  Uganda boasts a fairly small population of approximately thirty-three million (Raffaele), but a vast ratio of that number decreases day by day due to Uganda’s increasing rate of children being kidnapped.  Statistics show that over 20,000 kids have gone missing in Uganda year-to-date (Uganda’s Child Soldier).  Although this number may seem significantly smaller in comparison to the United States; both countries actually have around the same percentage of kidnappings each year, which roughly equates to less than one percent.  However, the difference between these two nations lies in the actions put forth to combat the issues of abduction and public safety that is constantly being tainted by violators amongst their societies. While the United States’ government grants billions of dollars to fund federal programs that return children safely to their parents, Uganda’s government allows rebels to steal their own people in staggering numbers. Also when these violators have been caught, the United States takes immediate action to prosecute the kidnappers; Uganda, however, tries a more peaceful approach by granting amnesty to the leaders of the Lord’s Resistance Army in exchange for the children’s safe return home.
            Each year, many children in the United States are kidnapped in order to pleasure the fantasies of pedophiles, to fulfill the dreams of infertile women, and even in some cases for the entertainment of torturing.  In Uganda, most of the children are being kidnapped for solely one purpose; that purpose is to become a member of the Lord’s Resistance Army and fight one man’s war.  This man is Joseph Kony. Joseph Kony is a man who has no mercy towards mankind let alone an innocent, defenseless child. He is believed to possess demonic powers that link him to the spiritual world (Wearn). As a myth of these powers became a reality amongst many people, there has been complete decimation in many Ugandan villages, which has many children growing up with the fear of a hopeless future. As a result, the children now realize that they are human items to be captured, while discovering that their government is virtually non-existent. Due to the Ugandan government becoming virtually non-existent and allowing the Lord’s Resistance Army to take over, the conflicts between them has done nothing, but burden the people of this country.          
            Over the past two decades, the issue between the Ugandan government and the Lord’s Resistance Army has caused the displacement of almost two million people (Talwar). The government has provided “safety camps” that are filled with approximately 7,000 temporary beds to house people in the city of Gulu (“Midnight’s Children”).  However, the phrase “safety camps” is an understatement; the camps are actually meant for internally displaced persons, lacking clean drinking water and adequate sanitary facilities. Thus, making theft an easy access and murder more common in their present day society due to the ruthless warlords under Kony’s control.
A local Ugandan, Elijah, a former father of fourteen children described the camps as being very bad and most of them died due to the conditions of the camps and the rest were killed by rebels. He also comments that he would “Rather die than live anymore of this life because people have lost their morals and that it’s sad to only be able to relax in the day, but have an increased sense of fear and worry as soon as the sun sets” (“Midnight’s Children”). 
In the United States, there are also camps that have been set up to help its citizens out of poverty, but only in the sense of helping them acquire a stable financial foundation.  These camps are referred to as government housing or in another sense, the projects.  Government housing in the United States also suffers from the negative impacts of theft and murder. However, the consequences of these crimes are much more severe than those committed in Uganda. A convict who commits a crime in the United States can serve anywhere from a year to life without parole and possibly even the death sentence depending upon the severity of the crime they committed. While a convict in Uganda can commit the exact crime and fail to receive punishment unless it is acted upon on a personal basis. 
Even though these two countries differ dramatically between the differences in how the government prefers to act upon certain situations, one fact remains true for each country and that fact is that every abducted child, no matter the country, has a story to tell about the pain they endured (mentally or physically) while living through the nightmare of captivity.   
Laweel, an Ugandan teenager who had been held captive by the Lord’s Resistance Army, was mutilated and forced to eat her own flesh along with ten other females who had to fight the rebels. (Andersson).  Afterwards they were humiliated in front of many people and forced to eat every bit of their own flesh. They were then sent home as an example to others as to what can happen if the orders of the Lord’s Resistance Army were disrespected (Andersson).  After this traumatic experience, each day she is reminded of her tragic ordeal.  She senses deep feelings of shame and defeat due to the looks of appallment she receives from people in her village once they have seen the disfigurement of her face. 
Elizabeth, an American teenager, was held captive in the basement of her abductor and mothered seven children with him.  Three of the children were forced to live in the basement with her while the other four were raised by her abductor and his wife.  When they were discovered, they had been in the cellar for so long that they had developed their own type of communication which featured grunts, growls, and animal like sounds (Frater).  Although Elizabeth’s abduction doesn’t house as much severity as Laweel’s, each of them, involuntarily took part in the crime of abduction.  They each were made to take a horrible keepsake to remind them of their time spent with each one of their kidnappers.  Laweel, will always receive that same look from strangers for the rest of her life due to the extensive disfigurement done to her face. Also, Elizabeth will always remember the times spent in the cellar of her abductor’s house due to the seven children she mothered with him because each child is a part of her and that can never be taken away (Frater).  Both of these young women are victims of circumstance and rage, but their stories are only amongst the thousands that have not yet to be heard.  The fact that there are still stories that have yet to be heard is evidence, that both countries, Uganda and the United States, should work on ways to fill the void that is allowing criminals to sneak through and have the opportunity to take advantage of a system that has failed.
            Even though Uganda is considered an undeveloped country and the United States is considered developed, each country has the same problem that is heavily associated with abduction.  Uganda might have fewer resources than the United States, but there are still many ways to protect the children of that country.  For instance, Uganda can solicit for global help in order to help find Kony and bring him to justice instead of offering him amnesty in place of allowing all of the children to be returned home.  Secondly, Uganda should began to question the missing 90% of the $130 million from the humanitarian community so that efforts can be made in order to provide the necessary resources needed to place people in safer environments so that the abduction rate can be reduced (Talwar).  Equally as important, Uganda should also offer options for food and clean water to the citizens so that they will be in better health to fight in numbers.
            The United States should use their technology to make it easier for citizens to track criminals. A proposed method to control abductors can lead to the innovation of a GPS chip that is injected into the arm of a criminal in order for their location to always be known by the people around them. Awareness ads should be advertised on billboards, televisions, radios, and even made to be a requirement in schools so that children and parents will be more educated on why the buddy system should be used and also taught the skill to be more aware of their surroundings.
Unfortunately, the ways of keeping children safe has yet to be considered a main issue. Therefore, the percentage of children missing in the United States versus those missing in Uganda will began to outweigh each other over and over.  Children will continue to be forced to leave their rightful home against their will and parents will continue to feel that same separation anxiety until a change is made in either country.  We will constantly be reminded of tragedies with stories like that of scarred victims like Laweel and Elizabeth and we will also constantly  hear of “safety camps” or “the projects” being subject to crime until the issue is fixed by each country instead of being covered up with temporary fixes.  Unfortunately, these are not the only two countries that are suffering from abduction issues, but they are two of the most prevalent in present day news.  Once every country comes together as one and helps each other create new ways to keep their citizens, mostly children, safe then the abduction rate will continue to climb until the situation spirals out of control.
           


Works Cited
Andersson, Hilary. Uganda’s Lost Innocents. BBC News, 2003. Web. 27 Sept. 2012
Frater, Jamie. 10 Terrible Cases of Kidnapping and Abuse. Listverse, 2012. Web. 29 Sept. 2012.
“Midnight’s Children” Harper’s Magazine 309.1851 (2004): 22. Student Edition. Web. 21 Sept.               2012.
Raffaele, Paul. Uganda: The Horror. People & Places, 2005. Web. 28 Sept. 2012.
Talwar, Namrita. “Fostering Terror: Child Soldier Crisis in Uganda.” UN Chronicle 41.2 (2004):   7. Student Edition. Web. 8 Sept. 2012.
Uganda’s Child Soldier. Kabiza Wilderness Safaris, 2011. Web. 28 Sept. 2012.
U.S. & World Population Clocks. United States Census Bureau, 2012. Web. 6 Sept. 2012.
Wearn, Rebecca. “The Long Wait for Peace.” New Internationalist 40.3 (2007): 21. Student                       Edition. Web. 15 Sept. 2012.